tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3882364249001688876.post6888507088316963615..comments2023-05-23T04:59:15.569-07:00Comments on Yao!: TIME CoverYao Lihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04199803414234102295noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3882364249001688876.post-46660434358725693732010-09-27T16:53:27.671-07:002010-09-27T16:53:27.671-07:00Looking good Yao,
The type behind uncle sam reads...Looking good Yao,<br /><br />The type behind uncle sam reads but could really benefit from more contrast, especially with TIME magazine (legibility first). Perhaps if you use one of the lighter grays from the chainmail that would tie the type and image together nicely. <br /><br />I am more concerned with uncle sam covering the 'p' in 'islamophobic.' You typeface is so bold and tightly kerned, maybe it could stand to a few point sizes smaller and use more of the space above 'sam' and below 'TIME.' <br /><br />Really minor thoughts, everything else looks sharp.David Colsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15061935292584741999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3882364249001688876.post-84243270339169882722010-09-27T07:22:16.801-07:002010-09-27T07:22:16.801-07:00I feel like the text can be in white to provide hi...I feel like the text can be in white to provide higher contrast from the background, although it does cut into Uncle Sam's head. Anyway, I like his hand; they're so gnarly.pluwwhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06830414163504272220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3882364249001688876.post-53438563759381000242010-09-27T05:19:30.529-07:002010-09-27T05:19:30.529-07:00It definitely reads; you could have more indicator...It definitely reads; you could have more indicators in there (setting comes to mind) but I don't think they're necessary. Nice work, like the drawing too.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05978514093713886624noreply@blogger.com